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<DIV class=quote>Let's improve the rules first :) </DIV>
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<DIV class=quote><B>以下是引用<I>散乱的阳光</I>在2005-5-24 16:56:58的发言:</B>
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<P>English ABC, </P>
<P>A place made <b>[Usually, you can not make a place, in stead you say a place where ... since it is virtual, consider to use 'space'.]</b> for all of us to practise and communicate with each other <b>[one another?]</b> <U>by</U> <FONT color=#ff0000>(in)</FONT> a <b>[very important, since this language is English, 'a' should not be used, use 'the' or 'the English']</b> foreign language.</P>
<P>Day after Day, <b>[day by day?]</b></P>
<P>The number of visitors <U>is </U><FONT color=#ff0000>(has been)</FONT> <b>['is' is better that 'has been' (in practice, not in text book)]</b> decreasing, the quality of English ABC is getting <U>worst </U><FONT color=#ff3300>(worse as ) </FONT>more advertisement<FONT color=#ff0000>s</FONT> and meaningless topics appearred <FONT color=#ff0000>(appeared). <b>[appear]</b></FONT></P>
<P>What happened to it? Where are the old friends? What should we do now to <U>see English ABC being crowded again </U><FONT color=#ff0000>(have more people participate in English ABC again)? </FONT></P>
<P>I want<FONT color=#ff0000>ed <b>[use 'want' instead of 'wanted', because it is obviously he is still wants to do that.]</b> </FONT> to see it happen, i want<FONT color=#ff0000>ed</FONT> <b><FONT color=#ff0000>[use 'want' instead of 'wanted'] </FONT></b>to do something, <U>then <FONT color=#ff0000>(</FONT></U><FONT color=#ff0000>so)</FONT> i made <U>this <FONT color=#ff0000>(</FONT></U><FONT color=#ff0000>the following)</FONT> descision<FONT color=#ff0000>s</FONT>:</P>
<P>The English ABC Revolution: </P>
<P>1. No advertisement<FONT color=#ff0000>s</FONT>,</P>
<P>2. No rubbish topic<FONT color=#ff0000>s</FONT>, <b>[No irrelevant topics - it is hard to tell what 'rubbish' means.]</b></P>
<P>3. Reward will <U>give</U> <FONT color=#ff0000>(go)</FONT> to member<FONT color=#ff3300>s</FONT> who <U>is keen in</U> <FONT color=#ff0000>(help in )</FONT> building up a New English ABC. <FONT color=#ff0000>(or </FONT><FONT color=#ff0000>Members who help in building up a New English ABC will be rewarded----this is better.) <b>[New -> new]</b></FONT></P>
<P>4. If possible, <U>no chinese should be seen </U><FONT color=#ff0000>(no Chinese words allowed)</FONT>. <b>['</b><FONT color=#ff0000>no Chinese words allowed</FONT><b>' conflicts with 'if possible', try 'Avoid using Chinese']</b></P>
<P>小鱼王子</P>
<P>17.05.2005 <b>[May 17th, 2005]</b></P><b>[That's my two cents. ]</b></DIV>
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<P><FONT face="Comic Sans MS" color=#0000ff><B>The above is just my twe cents worth.</B></FONT> </P>
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