一夜好痛苦

gogog

外国人 没有这么诗情画意的  形容

苂木

今宵酒醒何处，杨柳岸晓风残月....
bingerwang 发表于 29-8-2009 19:37

看我的~
i woke up with swollen, drunk eyes, while the leaves of willow  danced with the breeze of autumn, my sadness binked at me, the loneniness wrung around me and tiptoed, tiptoed to the crescentmoon of unknowed territory


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gogog

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bingerwang

看我的~
i woke with swollen, drunk eyes, while the leaves of willow  danced with the breeze of autumn, my sadness binked at me, the loneniness wrung at me and tiptoed, tiptoed to the crescentmoon of  ...
苂木 发表于 29-8-2009 20:09

admire for that

苂木

我可是乱写的。。
需要专家来看看。。大概意思吧。。
本来想写sadness of separation..因为他和他女朋友分开嘛。。怕影响意境就没写separation..

gogog

。。晕 原来可以这么简单

苂木

是地呀。。只要脑袋里有个意境句子就出来啦 管它对不对呢。。

白浪河

平时 常喝点 酒精 练练。

可以练出酒量来滴~