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<DIV class=quote><b>Nice essay. However, i guess you need to polish it - there are so many errors! No offence, i mark several errors inline ...</b></DIV>
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<DIV class=quote><B>以下是引用<I>>小爱<</I>在2005-7-9 20:35:00的发言：</B>
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<P>Have u ever missed someone and felt
terrible
because u think tat he/she doesn't miss u?
Missing someone is a terrible but at the
same time,
sweet feeling. <b>// missing is feeling? No, when you miss some one, you feel ...</b>
U will be sitting around wondering if u
<b>meant // Worth?</b>
anything to him/her.
<b>Thinking</b> if he/she ever cares about u. <b>// Wondering?</b>
<b>Rushing</b> to the phone once it rings
hoping that it's <b>// ^ from</b>
him/her.
Looking out of the window hoping that
he/she will
surprise u by appearing downstairs.
Sitting in front of the television but
thinking of
her
missing the final episode of your
favourite show.
Laying on your bed, thinking of the last
time u wen
out together.
Thinking of how nice it will be to sit
under the stars
again, talking about everything, your
dreams,
plans, future. <b>// plans and future.</b>
Logging on to the internet hoping to see
him/her
online.
When u realise that he/she isn't online
and did not <b>// do - inconsistence.</b>
return your page, u will start worrying if
he/she is
okay.
Missing someone is a way of growing up i
guess.
It exposes u to loneliness.
It teaches u how to cope with being
lonely and let u // <b>lets</b>
know that there is actually a feeling
known as
emptiness.
Sometimes it feels good to miss someone.
U know that u really care and u indulge
in the
feeling of loving/caring for him/her.
But missing someone and not knowing if
he/she is
feeling the same is terrible.
U feel as if u are being left alone.
So if u miss someone, tell him/her and
let them <b>// them? </b>
know.
At the same time, ask if they miss u.
Don't let the feeling of missing someone
become
jealousy or paranoid.
If u are the one being missed and u know
it, let the
other party know.
if u miss him/her too, tell them.
Don't let them wait.
sometimes its difficult to let others know that u
miss
them...its ok...u're not alone...but if u don't let in on
hw
much u miss them, u might lose them to sumone
else... u never noe, they might be afraid to tell u
too...there's always a small possibility...</P>
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